” I was the sky
and you were the sea,
wandering to find you,
consumed the best parts of me,
I was the sun
and you were the moon,
I hid myself each night,
just to let you burn,
I was the moth,
and you were the light,
I sacrificed myself,
Just to feast my eyes with your sight.
I was the fire ,
And you were the rain,
I gave away myself,
So that you’d never wane.
I was the earth,
and you were the breeze,
In the end, your existence,
forced my devastation to cease.
~ Saadia
Brilliant, Saadia, can feel the strength of the emotion! Also, I like the way it’s open to interpretation who it’s directed towards – God? A lover?…
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Yes, it is open for interpretation. This is actually a psychological poem, it is targeted at seeing who you think of while reading this .
Have a great day!
~ Saadia
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Beautiful words
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Thanks!
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Beautiful.
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Thank you 🙂
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Amazing, Saadia! I feel your words totally. They are like my story. Beautiful.
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Thanks a lot, Erika 🙂
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You are very welcome, Saadia 🙂
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🙂
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Every words carries such powerful emotions, beautifully expressed Saadia 🙂
Hope you are alright? Much love ❤
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Thanks a lot Zee.
Yes, I am fine. I have not been regular on my blog due to the tedious exams 😦
Thanks for coming over.
all the Love in the world 🙂
~Saadia
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Heaps of luck with your exams! I can understand how tiring it all can be. Hope you are able to catch your breath and relax a little too. Much love your way ❤
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Thank you, Zee.
The major problem is that due to continuous strike against the beef ban, my practicals are being postponed again and again. How can I cope up with this frenzy 😦
But I hope that you are having a great time 🙂
Love,
Saadia
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Oh I understand the never ending stress, I hope things settle for you guys soon, May Allah help you 💜
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Ameen . And I thank you for your kind words 🙂
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